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Old 04-11-2017, 07:39 AM
desiman7 desiman7 is offline
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Default Sonia and Anil

Thanks Breville. I am still in the process of writing, but I think (doesn't everyone?) that this plot is a little hatke.

Foogy helped me with the initial chapters and gave me valuable insight. One of the things she said after reading about Sonia's reaction to seeing Michael's car was "Yikes, this isn't going to be a romance is it?"

The answer is no. It is darker, much darker. As will be clear soon enough. At this moment, I plan to interweave Anil's and Sonia's flashbacks to create more interest. Anil's flashback is more recent; Sonia's is more remote.

Feel free to continue critiquing as you have. Thanks
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